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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
3/30/2005 |
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What beautiful heart-felt, 'tho sad, words that come alive for the reader. I don't want this said of me, so I'm living life to its fullest! :o)
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/30/2005 |
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So deeply poignant, this makes the heart ache with its beauty,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/25/2005 |
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| Chilling but very powerfully meaningful, Melissa. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
3/25/2005 |
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I'm speachless!
Extremely well written! |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
3/24/2005 |
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| Nice pen with a tinge of darkness |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/22/2005 |
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a fantastic write Melissa
Well Penned
William ......Peace |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/22/2005 |
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| poignant read, well done. glad to see you are writing again |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/22/2005 |
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Nicely done Melissa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
3/21/2005 |
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| A tale of woe compounded by the devilish pain of a broken heart. |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader) |
3/21/2005 |
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Very nice:)
Jennifer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/21/2005 |
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this is awesome, melissa; so good to be reading you again! very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos~ love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/21/2005 |
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Melissa, nobody does this like you! Wow!
You keep it all in perfect rhythm and rhyme
which is always an extra bonus for the reader!
Splendid poetry!
etw |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/21/2005 |
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| Powerful and haunting! This is your venue, Melissa. Its difficult at best to create poetry such as you do... |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
3/21/2005 |
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| this is excellent. the fourth verse might read more smoothly with one more word added to the last line ie 'that chokes and silences all her screams'. but what do i know, just a thought. |
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