|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|What beautiful heart-felt, 'tho sad, words that come alive for the reader. I don't want this said of me, so I'm living life to its fullest! :o)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So deeply poignant, this makes the heart ache with its beauty,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Chilling but very powerfully meaningful, Melissa. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by . ShyPoet1
Extremely well written!
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Nice pen with a tinge of darkness|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a fantastic write Melissa
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|poignant read, well done. glad to see you are writing again|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Nicely done Melissa!!
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|A tale of woe compounded by the devilish pain of a broken heart.|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|this is awesome, melissa; so good to be reading you again! very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos~ love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Melissa, nobody does this like you! Wow!
You keep it all in perfect rhythm and rhyme
which is always an extra bonus for the reader!
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Powerful and haunting! This is your venue, Melissa. Its difficult at best to create poetry such as you do...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|this is excellent. the fourth verse might read more smoothly with one more word added to the last line ie 'that chokes and silences all her screams'. but what do i know, just a thought.|