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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
4/18/2005 |
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Hi Melissa,
Your brother has penned a powerful poem.
The system is the system and it is sad.
I agree with Eileen.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/15/2005 |
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Superb! Our judicial system is a disgrace, it's too corrupt for politicians to deal with, so they ignore it! Only a massive outpouring might help, but I doubt if anyone has the heart to bother.
Hope things improve on your end!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
4/15/2005 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/15/2005 |
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Well penned Melissa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
4/15/2005 |
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Powerful write Melissa...not knowing the vagracies of your legal system, I can't really comment, but I suspect it's as screwed up as ours...but your words speak volumes, more power to your pen this is excellent.
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/15/2005 |
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tim is a talented writer as well, melissa; i can see where the talent lies!
very well done, tim; thanks for sharing this angry, powerful piece! very well done! and melissa: thanks for sharing your brother's talents with us!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Fritz Barnes |
4/15/2005 |
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Wow, the frustration and anger really comes through. Well done, Tim.
Very sorry to hear of your struggles. Hugs to you and your children, Melissa. |
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