|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|So beautiful, so much talent. A very touching write.|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|There is nothing wrong with tears. They are clensing and should not be held back. Too many men think they cannot cry, when they should also. My neighbor was crying today cause her daughter in Flo is in hospital dying of Emphysema, and having a rough time without her Mother. Always there is reason to cry to let out our feelings.|
|Reviewed by Matthew Wright
|Wow. That was just superb.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Well, Melissa, I certainly have not been around here much in the past few years but I am trying to catch up a little & sought out some of your inspiring work to reinspire me. I will have to raid your den to see what you have been up to.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Powerfully emotive and meaningful, Melissa. I find your poem most compelling. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A beautiful write Melissa
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Ah, Melissa, you have perfectly drawn in words what so many feel!! Are you our soul-sister, our heart-sibling? A perfect rendition of what life is often like, but with ever-present hope that the meaning may be seen. Beautiful!!
I visited your bio and your favorite poets and author are among mine. We must have met and mingled thoughts somewhere, sometime, someplace. (:D
Peace. Joyce Hale
|Reviewed by J M
|This one offers such well expressed emotions and thoughts that so many can relate to thank you inspired me.
|Reviewed by S J (Reader)
|Excellence in thoughts, Melissa! I love the last stanza.
"Yet as I live and breath I try
to learn from every tear I cry,
to find the message meant for me
that I may live as I should be"
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Tender introspective thoughts. Life is a struggle and we must look forward with courage, beautiful poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Beautifully expressed feelings that come flowing almost perfectly entwined from heart, mind and soul. It flows well and grips the readers feelings that they wonder what it is made the writer so seemingly distraught. Well done Melissa.
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|life does tend to place one within thought and show how memories last into years...
nice write.....art Sun...
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by Fritz Barnes
|Really resonates. Very nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Pamela garner
|I know all to well how these feelings can be. Great write.