|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... another deeply explored and well written poem. life is our best teacher, even though she is sometimes cruel. nice work here!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is outstanding, Melissa. Moving and very well written.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent verse...very well written..|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant poignant write ALL THE WAY AROUND!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, melissa; well done! (((HUGS))) and love to you and the kiddos from texas, your friend, karen lynn. :(|
|Reviewed by Jim Corbin
Not only is this well written, it is very poignant....
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Melissa, love your poem and advice. Your rhyming was perfect, as always.|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage
|Rough trip. Amazing that anyone would be so stupid to indulge in such a destructive habit for the lamest of excuses. Junkies contribute nothing and banqrupt the lives around them. You've treated it well. Fine work. Let's hope just one person listens, dear lady.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very wise antidote...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|This is so true for many
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such excellence of verse, and wisdom of message, exceptional Melissa!|