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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
8/30/2003 |
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| Breathtakingly beautiful ! |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
8/30/2003 |
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Oh, Melissa!
I see you hide your face from me
while I bleed from my bitten hand.
Can I relate to this. If you get a chance
to go to my site, you might relate to
"A Tale of Mrs. Jekyl" Thanks for such understanding here. |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
8/29/2003 |
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Pretty!
I see you hide your face from me
while I bleed from my bitten hand.
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Leaving memories to fade
inside this darkness, I am mourning.
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Will you slowly fade and die?
Or will you find your own salvation?
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It hurts to know it’s come to this,
but golden in my heart you’ll stay.
---- You really know how to end a stanza!
--- simple pleasure is reading your poetry!
Shy
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/29/2003 |
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Beautiful and so moving, this one touched my heart so deeply this morning,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/28/2003 |
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"At A Loss" flows in octameter lines (Almost all lines.) and dances under the sounds and cadence of profound thoughts and definitions to a wise decision.
I have read an excellent WRITING, and have learned an inspired lesson of life.
I Salute You, Poet Melissa Rives.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
8/28/2003 |
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Emotionally sad. An excellent write Melissa..
Have a great night....... |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
8/28/2003 |
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Great flow and meter, Melissa! And, wow, I felt every word. Excellent write.
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/28/2003 |
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| Breath taking write! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/28/2003 |
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Very well writen Melissa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/28/2003 |
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Beautiful expression of such a loss, Melissa. Great to return to.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/28/2003 |
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| Magnificent! Melissa, good to see you, hope all goes well for you;-)Stay in Him.... |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
8/28/2003 |
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Such eloquent verses! It's so good to read you again Melissa!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/28/2003 |
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| Melissa, very well done. Even though it hurts at times it is better to turn away. Excellent rhyme, flow and meter. |
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| Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield |
8/28/2003 |
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Melissa,
This is great. It has a very nice flow and the choice of words is superb! Great job! Thanks for sharing it with me.
- J - |
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