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Saturday, August 13, 2005
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it's as if you were never here

as I sit alone and stare

at the space we used to share

remembering how I used to care

and the pain I used to bear

but now I'm back alone

in the place that was our home

wishing that I'd only known

I would end up on my own

so I sit here now - alone.

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Reviewed by Barbara Terry 11/10/2005
Omg Blackberry, this sounds exactly like the thoughts I had, as my mother accepted me back into "her", not "our" home. As I was accepted back into the house, I was still alone and desperate for my mother's love and acceptance. Something she was not capable of giving. Even tho I have forgiven her, and am still proud that I look exactly like her, I will never forget the cruelty she imposed on me for 5 1/2 years, during my entire adolescence. I still cry at night knowing that I will never know a man's love, or the love of acceptance from my family. I am grateful tho, for the friends I have found here in AD. This is a very good write, Blackberry, and it brings back haunting memories of not only a lost youth, but of the sadness and aching I still bear, after all these years. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 8/21/2005
I agree with Felix - not necessarily the end. Captured the sorrowfulness very well through out the write. Greatly portrayed!

God bless, Blackberry!

Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/13/2005
Indeed...this is sad but not necessarily the end, it also shows hope for the future if y ou want to reach out and grasp it.

Good write
Reviewed by June Thompson 8/13/2005
so sad but captured so well

I agree with Michelle

and the picture really lets us see just how alone you can be

well read
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 8/13/2005
Very sad, liked the spare lines because it brought across the sense of being alone better than a thousand words would. Good work.
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