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Scoliosis of the Mind
by Cryssa C

Tuesday, September 28, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Scoliosis of the Mind

 

 

Muddled thoughts of fusion seem to cut into my mind;

bending spine with weight of thoughts—

Decisions that are mine

 

Nerves slice up the back bone; while thoughts invade my mind

Deflating air within my lungs

and moving things around

 

If I choose to fuse my will with that of you or him,

how will it change the face of me

and all that I can do?

 

But I believe, if left undone, the weight of things will bend

the fragile spine that now is curved

under burden fear

 

Conforming, then’s the answer--Fusing will with Yours,

by gently bending curving spine

to bow o’er humble knee.

 

 


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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 1/25/2011

a very lovely write
hug
kat
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/3/2010
Very well done indeed sweet lady enjoyed very much..take care OK..Hugsss
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/1/2010
Cryssa, this is wonderful, life-cherishing poetry~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Axilea MU 9/29/2010
The burden of our ego, sometimes mistaken for freedom, is much more dangerous for our mental/spiritual integrity than the little sacrifice made to accomplish beautiful things. Interesting thoughts in this piece...

Axilea
Reviewed by Charlie 9/29/2010
That Great Surgeon up in Heaven can seamlessly straighten all kinds of scolisis-of-the-mind (and of-the-will as well). I know he guides those less-great surgeons' hands as well.

A kiss to both you & (+)ie. --Aunt Cher
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/29/2010
such a well written metaphoric poem
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/29/2010
Compelling poem and intriguing title; it drew me in. Excellent writing, Cryssa; hope you and your family are well!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Paul Judges 9/29/2010
Well composed poem, Cryssa
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/29/2010
Laying things in God's hands takes them off our backs if we have faith.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 9/29/2010
Cryssa, I like the title, what you have to say and where you go with this.
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