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Blowing Out Stars
by Cryssa C
Monday, April 18, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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For Brenton...

Stars wept for you tonight
when you blew them out--
like candles.
You covered them
with smoke-like clouds;
and then they cried…

 You tried to subdue and disguise it,
but when you lay your head down
on those smoke pillow clouds
under cover of darkness
you let your own tears fall…

 Fifteen years of tears
poured down in rivulets
on my roof.

 And I knew…
that even in heaven
where stars always shine--
you miss your birthdays with us.

 I wanted to stand in that rain--
letting your tears soak through me,
to feel you close to my skin,
to cleanse away some of the pain…

Instead, I stayed inside,
knowing the futility of the rain
to cease our separation.
But…
it was enough to know
that sometimes…
sometimes…
you cry for me too.

 

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Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/25/2012
Your words touch my soul as always Cryssa...This is tender, loving work...
Diana..
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 10/18/2011
Such a lovely thought.
hug
Kat
Reviewed by Andy Turner 5/1/2011
So very heart-wrenching. Yet so very unique. Even rain causes memories in floods. Such strong visuals, one can feel it's written straight from the soul!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 4/28/2011
"Stars wept for you tonight"...what an image! The kind of rain you speak of here does not fall softly upon the skin, but rather, each drop feels like a burning fire--the pain of loss, of separation. I think it is beautiful the image of your loved one crying for missing you, but also the depth of emotion in this piece goes right to the heart and soul. A graceful expression of pain. My sympathy to you, Cryssa. ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/27/2011
A most compelling and soul-reaching write, Cryssa. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Axilea MU 4/24/2011
Stars blown like candles, tears like rain that poured down on the roof... beautiful imagery of those essential elements (the stars, air, water) that represent the inner movement of feelings. The strength of lasting memories and bonds.

Axilea
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/22/2011
This is painfully sweet,so beautifully and tenderly written!

Happy Easter,
Eileen
Reviewed by baz busbe 4/22/2011
Such a beautiful poem, I could feel the longing to be together again, had tears in my eyes. God bless. Baz
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/19/2011
so heart felt and heart rending-beautiful :(
Reviewed by Charlie 4/19/2011
"Death cannot stop true love; all it can do is delay it for a while." --The immortal Westly

Sounds like the sky was tailor-made for you. Happy Birthday, little angel. I love you. --Aunt Char
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 4/19/2011
Deeply touching, beautifully penned Cryssa.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 4/18/2011
This is a well crafted work, Cryssa,
poignant and deeply evocative;
fine fine writing.

John
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/18/2011
Beautiful poetry, Cryssa; so great to see you here again! I've missed you! Hope you are doing well!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 4/18/2011
What a gorgeously intimate witness to the pain, so utterly moving and well-crafted. xx
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by John Bidwell 4/18/2011
Wow- what beautiful deep feeling poetry.
Thanks for sharing.

John



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