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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
2/1/2008 |
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| A deep sensuous poem. Your words capture it all. Great images..........M |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/1/2008 |
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| A sensuous write that's well done! |
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
1/28/2008 |
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| Wow, this one is hot and heavy with wonderful visions and deeply penetrating playing on words. What a wondeful piece, I hope you get this published. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
12/25/2007 |
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A very moving and sensous write, profound indeed...well done my friend, enjoyed this. Thanks for stopping by my den you are welcome anytime. I will be visiting again...write on, happy holidays.
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
12/25/2007 |
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empty
and alone
I dream of your touch
drenched by the gaudy beauty of the night
I yearn to fill you with delight
and long sought peace
...indeed..THAT about sums it up!
You truly have touched me with these profound words..oh yes, I sense what you write about..it seems we are kindred souls of the written word..thank you for being here..I shall visit your den often..
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/25/2007 |
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Excellent offering....thanks for sharing and your visit!!
Merry Christmas to you!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/17/2007 |
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To me. Erotic and engaging. But who am I to know? Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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