|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Vivid imagery in this beautiful passoniate poem. Well done....M|
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|"With You" reveals the wonderful sense of connection many of us feel with those whom we love. The fact that the object of our affection is beyond the reach of a "touching of souls" in no wise lessens the pull of our heart, even while we bring forth "magnificent dreams of tomorrow with you."
Rafika, you have penned a unique and poignant insight. Thank you for putting into words our universal feelings.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|as a midnight bloomer
aches for the sun
A fine simile and the whole poem is completely captivating and makes one wish for such as you describe within your verses. Thank you, Rafika. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|first, the cat at first looked like it was porceline, but you have penned a wonderful work...full of passions images. And I know the cat was real...I think.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Such a beautifully loving piece and a gorgeous kitty too....
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|My, this is so heartwarming and captivating! And yes, passion is captured in every line. Enjoyed. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Have a Great Christmas and New Year!
Poetry to embrace for sure
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Wow, this is so beautifully passionate..Depth of passion in each word. I can feel your emotions..well done!
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. :) Such sweet sentiments...love the lines,
"...in a passionate embrace
of your face against my face
crushing the air between them
on the verge of giving birth
and brings forth
with you" <---------yes. YES!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.