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| Reviewed by James Ward |
6/15/2002 |
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| I bet your parents are really proud of you, you certainly do have a way with words, keep up the good poetry :) |
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| Reviewed by Shezray Faisal |
6/6/2002 |
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| Amazing. Excellent rhyme and touchingly realistic! |
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| Reviewed by Kala Starkey |
5/10/2002 |
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| Once again an amazing poem. The rhythm is great and sounds perfect |
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| Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips |
3/28/2002 |
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Bravo! Here's to your parents and to a lovely young lady who has such a gift with words. (and more)
Alan & Janet |
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| Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) |
3/28/2002 |
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| Interesting ...nice! |
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| Reviewed by Steve Patterson |
3/28/2002 |
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| Well Said. Well written. Rythmn & Ryhme - good poem,-steve |
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| Reviewed by chander keswani (Reader) |
3/28/2002 |
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| poem expresses well through the mind.it captures our thought.wel done Marie. |
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| Reviewed by chander keswani (Reader) |
3/27/2002 |
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| i have chills; the words, rhythm, tone, style and message sing so clear in this poem. i want to read it again...the verses asking questions remind me of how life reveals itself to us as we live it. looked at the poem as a shape or geometric figure. it struck me as looking like a person. i really enjoyed the poem. vicki |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/27/2002 |
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| Your parents must be proud. The good news is that more parents are now teaching the things your parents taught you. loved this poem. |
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