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Burning

I burn
like a candle
deep inside
I'm yearning
desire
never wanting to die
flame flickers
steadily
never losing control.
Temptation
Penetrating
never letting go
Warm and deep
inside my soul.
Dancing
like a river
of fire
you course
inside my veins
flowing
letting go
releasing
what remains.
So gentle
is your smile
your tenderness
melting my heart;
I cannot recall
how or when
with you,
I've been
burning
from the start.


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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was excellent, I loved this, beautifully written,

Reindeer
Reviewed by michael
Passion and feelings flow through you into your pen...Well done...michael
Reviewed by Marco Landi
a wonderful piece that....consume the thought on both ends.....
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU


"Burning Up" is a lamp of desires nourish with oils of life scented by

Cupid with aroma of satisfaction to please Frigg. It is a lamp that

keeps its light on blinking to keep alive the reason of living. It can't stop

its oils from burning for desires must be fulfilled and the only thing to be

recalled is pleasure for it brings energy to keep its flame on.

“Burning Up” delivers its message from the first to the last line.

I have enjoyed a pleasant and striking reading.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Dena Moore
Beautiful!
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Some like it hot and you definitely get that in this poem. This is not as naughty as you usually are but it's sweet and definitely romantic.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
full of passion, this write! well done, donna! :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((donna)))

just gorgeous...passionate and beautifully written

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
A BEAUTIFUL PIECE!!!!
Love the metaphor used...ahhhh such burning yearning love and desire!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
You got me burning from both ends.
Reviewed by David Knight
Lovely images. Out there is a lucky man indeed.

David
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Beautiful, now you have all of us burning up!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most passionate ya!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
Awesome write... awesome imagery, dear friend...
~~~Love, Light and Harmony~~~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Beautiful write indeed! Such lovely feelings.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Dhruv Foster
Lovely...
I cannot recall
how or when
with you.
I've been burning
from the start ...too good.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Wonderfully written Donna. Passionate yet very soft and gentle. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Excellent metaphor....lovely....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
... a nice declaration of gentle passion!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
marvelous metaphor,to melt by;-)excellent poem!
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