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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
4/19/2003 |
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i always loved the quote from ahab i believe
i dont care who you are heres to your dream.
good poem |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/18/2003 |
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| fine write, richard! thanks for your review; 'twas most appreciated! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/17/2003 |
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is this about mankind or yourself???
hmmmmmm
you are an enigma
I like it! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
4/16/2003 |
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| Grand write I enjoyed the read |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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Hummmm. You are blue.
I like this one too. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/15/2003 |
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This was so excellent, Your words just echo in my heart,
I liked this very much,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by amica |
4/15/2003 |
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"does the white whale call you
as it does to myself
silent at first but true
till in your soul it's wealth, "
yes...
as it does to many, and the beauty, here, is in it's human searching, lost/found/lost...
again. fine work, deeply from within the heart and the soul, thank you, you make one know they are not alone in the struggle...
hope that 'gate to home' will truly open
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| Reviewed by amica |
9/10/2002 |
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| very fine writing... |
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| Reviewed by K.M. |
9/10/2002 |
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| Awesome stuff dude! |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
9/10/2002 |
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| Richard, God...can't think, kept reading, just...'a fervent chase across the understanding of god there to that empty space....'and as Peggy said, oh, that gate to home...Just awesome/relate and so so much here, but that search...so much here, such is life. SO DAMNED EXCELLENT, JUST, THANKS...+++++ .. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
9/10/2002 |
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Fantastic write Richard!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$ |
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