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Ocean Sounds
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Kelly J Eveleth
Thursday, December 27, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem describing the ocean.
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Hearing the ocean
How do I explain
The rushing white crest
To one who hasn’t the
Soul to listen.
The crashing of waves
On the sand giving
More than a whispering
Breeze tingling the cheek.
There isn’t a sound to
Compare to the power
Struggle of water
Against rock.
But the consistent
Desire of the ocean
To meet the land
Voices of the mightiness of life.
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/10/2009 |
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| Awesome write! I grew up beside the ocean and it's always been a source of great inspiration to me. I feel the power of the sea in your poem. Nice job. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
12/7/2008 |
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| I find peace at the ocean, love to walk on those golden sands, find shells, see the seagulls flying overhead and the boats way out on thewater. The waves wash over me and make me clean an my problems go all away at the ocean. |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/18/2008 |
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Nice Nature Poem.
Time spent near water IS time well spent!
Let's hear more like this one!
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by raymond charles |
2/29/2008 |
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| marvellous and interesting poem |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/27/2007 |
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| a solid attempt at capturing the sea ... |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
12/27/2007 |
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ah, my kind of write Kelly, i love being inspired by sand, waves, and the goodness that the ocean brings to one's life.
always,
randy |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/27/2007 |
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Kelly,
Beautiful poem. The soul to absorb life's wonders comes with the ability to listen with the heart and mind. That last sentence says it all. Peace, Love and Blessings to You Always, Paul. |
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