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But Yet
by Kelly J Eveleth
Thursday, January 03, 2008
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This poem contrasts the emotions sometimes experienced.

But Yet…

Wanting to be
Alone
Yet
Feeling Loneliness

Seeking to be
Authentic
Yet
Surrounded by others

Desiring to be
At Peace
Yet
Sitting in calmness

Craving to be
Loved
Yet
Constantly being wanted

Wanting to be
Heard
Yet
The Voice is unknown

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen	5/22/2008

I feel the longings in this. Good write**********




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	1/4/2008

Well said the way you show contrasting thoughts from within.... Be safe, Karen




Reviewed by R Beeman	1/4/2008

very well done i must say. creates a well balance to wants, needs and the reality of life. those words are key words for those who are missing those thoughts in their own minds. always randy




Reviewed by Brittany Renée	1/3/2008

Never been too acquainted with modern stylization of poetry, but this one catches me. I really like how you put the subject in each stanza on the second line, and dramatically declined them to a whisper in the fourth. A very good write, to me :)

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