|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|I feel the longings in this. Good write**********|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Well said the way you show contrasting thoughts from within....
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|very well done i must say. creates a well balance to wants, needs and the reality of life. those words are key words for those who are missing those thoughts in their own minds.
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Never been too acquainted with modern stylization of poetry, but this one catches me. I really like how you put the subject in each stanza on the second line, and dramatically declined them to a whisper in the fourth. A very good write, to me :)|