To See the Sun
by Cheryl Shoemaker
Thursday, March 21, 2002
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This was written back in 1988....the end of a very bad relationship....yes, we both lived, and I have long ago left the bastard, and moved on.
He hurt me....
he hurt me in so many ways,
from the inside out his work he did.
I lay next to him, and hate him
a bullet to his head, a knife to his heart,
how can I? when will I?
The bastard, he lives as I lay dying,
the decay of what was once thought love..
it burns my nostrils as I gasp to breathe,
the putrid air, it suffocates me.
Tomorrow, tomorrow will come..
will he see the sun rise...will I ??
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|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|good for you!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Norris
|Why didn't I see this one before. Know that feeling well. Never said it like that, tho'!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the sun will rise and leave you illuminated...|
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
|hard hitting. well said. well timed.- steve|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I'm so glad you have left him. Not really a good feeling to be in.
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by William Manchee
|A tough relationship. Glad you survived.|
|Reviewed by Gilles Marchand
|Nice to hear this, so... is the sun shining now...?
Blue eyed fish...