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Left Needing
by Cheryl Shoemaker
Friday, March 22, 2002
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He kisses me,
and I feel his need.
His tongue moves across my lips,
and I feel his need.
He caresses me..one hand on my breast,
and I feel his need.
His hand explores my inner thigh,
and I feel his need.
I part my legs, I am open to him,
and I feel his need.
As we move in harmony,
the sweat we taste as only lovers do...
and I feel his need.
He whispers to me of love and wanting,
and I feel his need.
But then,
But when..he lies spent,
I lay empty and wanting..
I lay needing.
He holds me..and feels not my need.
He kisses me..and feels not my need.
how can he not feel it...
the fire, the burning,
how can he not feel it...
this need is pulsating, palpable.
how can he not feel it?
Why does he not feel it..
this need of mine.
He sleeps now,
while I lay awake.
He thinks he knows me,
and I thought so too..
But we are strangers...now
as I lay needing
He sleeps now,
unaware that soon we will part.
He will ask why?
and how will I tell him...
just another man..
that left a woman awake
not knowing her need...
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| Reviewed by Ron Dondiego |
3/23/2002 |
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| It made me wonder if it was just ignorance or selfishness. Oh well, excellent writing! |
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| Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) |
3/23/2002 |
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| Nice piece dear :) |
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| Reviewed by Robin Labenberg |
3/23/2002 |
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| nice poetry..you need to speak up..wake him up.. |
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| Reviewed by Gilles Marchand |
3/23/2002 |
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Betrayal of a brocken heart...!
Blue eyed fish... |
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| Reviewed by Edmund Canto |
3/22/2002 |
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Great poem Cheryl, but the second half of it
sounds like whoever is a loser. I like the poem. |
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| Reviewed by Hunter Montgomery |
3/22/2002 |
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| Turn around and pound his face in with a pillow. He has some learning to do, obviously. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/22/2002 |
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| Whoa...guess some will never guys learn...better luck next time...Well done..;-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/22/2002 |
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| nice poem... enjoyed reading |
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