My Love, Jill
by Nate L Oakley
Saturday, March 29, 2008
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After blushing over Jill's tribute to me, a poem which proves I'm a lucky man, I had to write one for her.
Here's to an amazing poet, a caring heart, my "partner in rhyme," and more than that, my loving "brown-eyed girl," Jill Eisnaugle......xo
A breath of spring, a newborn fawn
A sleepy summer morning’s yawn
A glimpse of autumn ‘cross the lawn
And winter’s sparkling hint of dawn
You are the seasons I adore
You fill each one with peace, galore
I know a good day lies in store
Knowing you wait, beside the shore
The road ahead is crystal clear
Life’s troubles seem to disappear
I see the sun and know you’re near
Even if miles away from here
You’ve shone a light into my heart
You’ve stood by me, right from the start
Angelic prayers have played a part
In our bond’s simple work of art
A cherished gift from long ago
A rare and priceless memento
A timeless dream; a warm hello
The memories that surely grow
You’re the rewards I hold at will
The good times which give me a thrill
The softness of a babbling rill
But most of all, you’re my love, Jill.
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|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|So sweet and beautiful- great rhyming, too :)|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|This is such a unique style. I am not one who can write much in rhymed poetry and have a poem that comes out sounding unforced, so to see two sets of 4 lines in each of rhymed poetry in each stanza....WOW! My hat goes off to you.
You have found yourself quite a peach in Jill. :~)
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Ah, Leann, me too, this is MOST BEAUTIFUL!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Leann Marshall
|I feel fortunate to be among those witnessing such love and admiration between two people. Truly inspiring.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Your poem is scented with that of a rose,,, very sweet!!!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautiful!!!!!!!! Jill is an asset to the Den, as are you - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Now, I'm blushing. Thank you. You're an awesome poet and a great person; I'm very lucky, myself. (Neat style to this poem, too; I'd never thought of 2 sets of 4 rhymed lines per verse)
Have a great Saturday and I'll catch up with you later,
Jill.......xo, right back at ya
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful tribute to a special person here at the den, our own Jill Eisnaugle! Very well penned~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D