by Nate L Oakley
Saturday, April 05, 2008
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A poem about how the angels bless the most meaningful of relationships and how true love never fades.
The angels sing in harmony
Across the sky so perfectly
Their song is one of destiny
An accolade to you and me
Their voices rise beyond the moon
In unison, they share their tune
Their soft melodies serve to croon
The weakest heart into a swoon
The sky today is misting rain
But, no one will stop to complain
Spellbound by the angels’ refrain
About our love, simple and plain
Our love is not forced or compound
It is something deeply profound
And the most wondrous part around
Is each note that the angels sound
The angels sing a lullaby
Upon the wind; across the sky
Their tune is one uttered on high
About our love, not made to die
Their voices rise beyond the sun
Thankful our love has now begun
Years from now when my life is done
Their song will prove you are my “One.”
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|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|This doesn't miss a beat rhythmically, and it is such a beautiful message. Loved it.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Love that makes the angels sing, and vice versa...Great write!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|You have expressed a wonderful feeling,, and yes Angel sing in celebration.
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|Another loving tribute.
This never gets old.
Like another bouquet of flowers.
I enjoy your lovely words and gentle style.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Such beautiful lines - excellently penned, Nate. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|don't pussy foot about, go get her or regret, faint heart never one fair maiden...|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...much beauty found in your words...of one forever held...and the angels who share in its eternal union.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Awwww..... sweet poem. Great work, Nate