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Recently, I had a light-hearted discussion, with a certain poet I know, about our lives and moments in them. During the discussion, I was informed that my memory appears to be leaving me.
I wrote this poem as a tribute to us men --- we may forget, but we still love our women and are lucky that our women put up with us.
P.S. Smile, Jill ;-)
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I may not always remember a date
I may leave some things in the hands of fate
Sometimes, I may miss our anniversary
But, that being said, you mean the world to me
I may not do things in the manner you do
But, this does not matter; my heart remains true
You will always be a sweet treasure I’ve found
Even if to amnesia I’m hopelessly bound
I may not always see the world in your light
Sometimes, my mind can be as dark as the night
At times, I am as blind as a man can be
And wonder why you waste a minute on me
One thing is for certain, you’ll always be cool
Even if I act like a moronic fool
You are the best gift that my life has been given
Even if by hopelessness my head is driven
I may not always recall your birthday
I may lack the skill to find the words to say
Sometimes, I know that I do not realize
How special these things are in a woman’s eyes
But, this much is certain; my heart’s yours to keep
Even if I may seem ungrateful or cheap
By caring, regardless, you show me I can
Be worthy enough to be known as your man
© 2008 - Nate's Poetry Slate
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/11/2008 |
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Geez Nate, you sound just like Robert, but I love him dearly anyway...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/11/2008 |
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| Ain't that sweet? Nothin' like kissin' up...LOL, Ed |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
4/11/2008 |
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| In my book, this poem would negate all past transgressions and would consititue a free-ticket to continue on just as you are! |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
4/11/2008 |
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| ah...Nate she will forgive you as long as you make her heart sing!!!sssshhhh that's the secret. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/11/2008 |
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lol,,, I get a charge out of this,, I will never forget one year when my Mom called me to wish me a Happy Wedding Anneversay,,, I forgot along with my husband,,, oh well,,,,lol There is so much more huh??? Great write Nate!
:)Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
4/11/2008 |
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You couldn't let me have the last word, could you? HA!!! At least you didn't mention PMS in there. That's probably enough for a novel, though, huh? ;-)
Cute poem, Nate. For what it's worth, I'm glad I put up with you and will always overlook it, when your memory fails. I appreciate you, just the way you are.
Thanks.
Jill
P.S. I am smiling! |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/11/2008 |
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hee, hee... These words sound so much like my husband! But... I am grateful I have him...amnesia and all!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
4/11/2008 |
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| Wonderful Write! Any woman would be so proud to have a man like you even WITH Amnesia! ha Cheers! Deborah |
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