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Bowling for Love
by Nate L Oakley
Saturday, May 31, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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A poem comparing my two loves in life: Jill and bowling

I have so much goodness to spare
I’m grateful that you choose to care
This turkey is blessed you are there
You’re my odd strike of fate

You are, indeed, my perfect game
Your gentleness remains the same
To me, I’m glad you’ve staked your claim
You’re awesome and you’re great

With you, there’s no 7-10 split
The gutter is far from legit
My bonus is your special wit
God’s cutter from above

You are a gem; you are ideal
My feelings for you are so real
Your heart is what I long to steal
When I’m bowling for love

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Reviewed by Barbara Smith	6/1/2008

Nate, this is a great tribute to "someone"...loved it!




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	5/31/2008

Sounds like a 300 to me,,,,:)




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	5/31/2008

Right down the center, perfect strike! Well done, Nate, (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.




Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle	5/31/2008

This is cute and hey, at least you put me first. ;-) Jill

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