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Sand and Sea: A Six Month Anniversary Poem
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Nate L Oakley
Thursday, August 14, 2008
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Today, August 14th, marks the six month point since Jill and I had our first date. Over the last six months, we have grown closer and stronger. She is truly a gift in my life.
Since six months isn't important to most people (and Jill is incredibly realistic on things), I didn't buy a gift; I wrote the poem, instead. I think she'll love this more, don't you?
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You are my sand; you are my sea
You hold the heart that beats in me
You are my wind; you are my sun
You have been my rock since day one
I can’t believe six months have passed
Yet, what we share is meant to last
I long to see what lies ahead
Down this romantic course we tread.
You are my angel without wings
You magnify life’s simpler things
You are my jewel; you are a pearl
You are my one and only, girl
I can’t believe that you are mine
Each day, you are my Valentine
Six months ago, our path began
And, I am proud to be your man.
You are my life; you are my breath
I’ll love you ‘til there’s nothing left
Each moment that we share is grand
Our lives as blessed as God had planned
Six months ago was our first date
The day our hearts gave way to fate
Next to a mountain, I am small
But, with you, Jill, I have it all.
© 2008 - Nate's Poetry Slate.
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/10/2009 |
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| Fine words, Nate....well done |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/10/2009 |
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| THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM - REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR DECLARATION OF LOVE AND APPRECIATION OF THAT SPECIAL SOMEONE IN YOUR LIFE. I KNOW SHE LOVED THIS POEM. GOD BLESS YOU BOTH. THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/19/2009 |
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| Every woman alive would treasure this romantic gift you have prepared for your lady. She will love it I'm sure Nate.Great job, nicely penned. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
4/13/2009 |
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| Beautiful...and congratulations to you! |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/13/2009 |
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| A wonderful ode of love the someone special in your life......M |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
9/5/2008 |
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Nate -
This is a REMARKABLE POEM (Glad I gravitated into your direction)
your poetry style is stunning!
She will totally love this!
KEEp it strong and you both will NEVER go wrong!
I'm so happy for you both! CONGRATULATIONS to a lasting, true love!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay POsitive!
Oh, and your flowwwwww was exquisite - in this piece, I will be TRACKING your hearts writing style/etc.
I write all genres (when you can) take a peek and stay awhile! Dark, Erotic, Romance, Funny and Inspirational |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/18/2008 |
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Nate,
This is beautiful - congratulations to you and Jill!! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/14/2008 |
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| awwwww,,, Simply BEAUTIFUL! Happy 6 month Jill and Nate. |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
8/14/2008 |
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Nate,
I love it!!!! (I'm also in tears, right now.) THANK YOU!!!!!!! What a memorable date that was, too. I hope you have a wonderful day, my sweet, sweet man. Here's to many, many more we will share together. Without doubt, you own my heart.
Many Hugs and Much Love,
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
8/14/2008 |
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| Great, I think she'll love it, I do. Sounds like a very happy 6 months. May it long continue too. Enjoyed this memorable one. |
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