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When It Rains Inside
by Zach B McClure
Thursday, June 18, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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One of those days?

WHEN IT RAINS INSIDE

by Z.B.McClure

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Random droplets clinging to the window pane.

Upon the grass, are remnants of the fallen rain.

Evidence of God's good care. Yes, He's still there.

When silvered curtains of the sky mute out

the sun, till it seems shy;

Leaving even optimists, to wonder why...

Do we not all feel this way, sometimes?

All dim and moody deep within?

Remember. When the rain just

seems to have no end:

The sun WILL SHOW

His face AGAIN!

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Reviewed by Sharon Whitworth Daring Sunshine	7/6/2009

This is lovely! Well done!




Reviewed by Liana Margiva	6/20/2009

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	6/18/2009

Such beauty within each word... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Susan Smith	6/18/2009

The sun will shine! Thanks. Susan




Reviewed by Cryssa C	6/18/2009

Feeling this way today... too many days of rain maybe?? :~) Cryssa




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	6/18/2009

There is a saying in French, "Après la pluie, le beau temps." Your poem is precisely about that same theme. I like the optimistic tone of your verses. Thank you, Zach. Love and peace to you, Regis

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