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Remember Me
by Ed J.

Monday, January 07, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This was a surprise poem from my dark side using words my loved one said to me when we had our first argument January 27, 2007,


So preciously I offer
My heart foever sworn
I view of all adored
My gift of words reborn


My world to fill desires
My all I stand to lose
Creative arts aspired
My words and drawings fused


So much of heart was given
That none remains to feel
Emotions no more driven
My world without a will


Devoted love was offered
A love of all returned
Sweet words were never softer
With lies, my soul they burned


Farewell my heart, my love my words
Creative hands lay still
Now gone the grace and beauty
That drove my loving will




I could no more forget you
Then my suffocating breaths
Shared dreams, be forfeit to
An abyss of empty depths




You'll always be remembered
For I gave you all I am
With losing you dismembered
Left a shell, that was a man



Goodbye my love


Copyrighted 2007 Ed J







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Reviewed by Gail D (Reader) 1/23/2013
No one could ever forget such a loving man unless they are deaf, blind and dumb, these words you have written just exemplify your passion and love.

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 4/25/2009
Oh the pain of cutting words from a loved one - I know it too well!
You wrote this really from a heart that loved, "You'll always be remembered" is what we all can say for goodbyes can be said, but the heart never says goodbye.

Reviewed by Keith Rowley 12/9/2008
Lovely. Reminds me of a verse penned for or by the late Brian Jones:
When this you see remember me
And bear me in your mind
Let all the world say what they may
Speak of me as you find.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 1/9/2008

A beautiful sad story said in poetic grand. "Remember Me" depicts a true heart under romantic love.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by R Beeman 1/7/2008
well said and a good reflective write that sounds of peace through pain.

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