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Fulfillling Love's Commitment
by Ed J.
Monday, February 04, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This poem was written last year after meeting the woman I loved.


Too many times belated
Our dream so real today
This day so long awaited
Our love has found its way

At distant glance, a captive smile
Our distance draws to none.
This moment froze, a minutes while
Our waiting finally done

Beheld my heavens vision
With eyes that pierce my soul
Hearts touch with soft collision
Emotions swell ten-fold

My longing heart possessed by yours
The air around us parting
Captivating your allure
Within me tremble starting

 Eyes locked in love's surrendered gaze.
One kiss and passion’s born
The world around us blurring haze
Our hearts no longer forlorn

With touch of lips desires flare
Our bodies close conforming
Fulfill our dreams, forever share
Within us true love burning

Too short our time in meeting
Our future words we share.
A life anew we're seeding
With tenderness and care

Desires grow inside me
In time we are apart
Our hearts together beating
You're the keeper my heart

 Copyrighted Ed J 2007





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Reviewed by Mary Coe 2/14/2008
So beautiful and romantic. A lovely write.
Reviewed by Richard Swartz 2/10/2008
Ed: this is so wonderful and it has a lot of meaning to it, way to go! What a grate Write....

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/7/2008
Truly romantic, Ed, as this is sincere expression of a beautiful duality of hearts and souls. May you both be forever blessed. Such union is rare indeed. Flawless rhyme and metre that is born along by the strength of emotion. Excellent! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 2/5/2008
A truly romantic, loving and sparkling piece so full of wonderful expression....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 2/5/2008
Ed this is so beautiful and I am sure the love of your life is just smothering you by now after reading these beautiful words. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 2/4/2008
Very soft, tender and beautiful in it's gesture of the forever promise. Love is priceless and finding that spirit to dance forever with yours is the heart's desired meaning. So many people today are questing for this bounty and so, your poem is vital to their call.
Blessings and love,
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/4/2008
Glorious love poem Ed! Your woman can only be filled to the brim reading this!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/4/2008
tender and so lovely--a treasure for sure
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 2/4/2008
I really enjoy your poetry, this is lovely work.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/4/2008
One of the best damn love poems this old guy has ever read . . . Yes indeed . . . Emotions asked . . . Emotions fulfilled . . .
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 2/4/2008
So beautiful this is, Ed....especially the last stanza.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 2/4/2008
Oh, this is beautiful. A wonderful tribute to the woman who shares and keeps your heart tenderly next to hers. You are blessed.

God bless you. Kathy

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