|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is a fine collaborative offering that serves as lesson as well. Thank you, Jon. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|An elegant collaboration that marks that time in history, yet shows glimpses of the tragedy going on, too. Excellent work. Happy Easter:)
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Important information not to be forgotten!
Wonderful Collab. with Carole M
The imageries are amazingly done and felt!
HANG TOUGH still comes to mind!
Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Places of peace. It's hard to tell the fear that was once sheltered there. I recall Fort Santiago at sunset in Manila. Lovers walked and a cannon fired, while I found MacArthur's limousine rusting away in a gun turret.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Jon, the imagery in this is wonderful...as is the collaboration!|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
As I said in the review to Carole's posting I regret I don't know enough about American history, but the poem stands by itself, and your collaborations work, they most certainly do.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You both master the art of collaboration, with such splendid poems such as this! Thanks for sharing!...ET|
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|I agree with Tinks. The imagery is superb. It has a story-like feel to it. Just correct the spelling of the word 'frivolous'. I know how easy it is to make typos. I've gone back and read some of my stuff and literally groaned so always appreciate it when people point things out.
A wonderful write. Congrats Jon and Carole!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great imagery...and collab U 2 !!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I love the imagery used - a quote I've often heard came to me while reading these lines penned by you and Carole - those that forget history are condemned to repeat it - very well done, Jon!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by 000 000
|The ghostly shadows of wars past....and tales will be told the same, of the wars now.
Very compelling writing