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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/4/2009 |
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Well I've never picked tomatoes or melons but I have toiled in the sun picking strawberries, raspberries and beans as a youngster/teen. I do remember the long days in the hot sun. Thank you, Jon. Love and peace to you,
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/16/2009 |
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Vivid pictures are painted in the poem. It takes the reader there.
Hard work and toil reap the harvest of human existance ..M |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
5/31/2009 |
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| You really painted this scene to life with your words. I especially liked that ending and how we start out in the beginning concentrating on the sensual side of fruit and by the end it is the plight of the peasants that we see. Excellent work, Jon. Thanks so much for always reading my work, even when life gets crazy and I cant get to everyone's poems. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/31/2009 |
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Work of hands to the bone...fantastic imagery, can feel the heat of the sun...and releif as it sets...great job Jon!
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/30/2009 |
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I would have loved to have that job!!! I love working in the farm or orchards. I don't mind hard work at all!!! You have taken me there with you with this wonderful write!!!
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
5/30/2009 |
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Jon, your words take me back to my first job position...Detassler :)
I Loved working in the corn fields though...
but watermelon? I see that as a very heavy job for sure...opps did we drop one? Don't waste...taste great!
Embraced~Embrassι
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/28/2009 |
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A taste of the migrant life. From 9 to 12, my brother and I picked green beans in the summer. At 14 and 15, we helped old man Nowaki pick his two acres of four kinds of raspberries. At least we got some school money and could go home to a great meal and bed at night.
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/27/2009 |
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Jon,
So vivid, this scene you paint. I can feel the aching shoulders and back. Reminds me of a book I read about cotton picking. Brutal work. You brought this character to life. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/27/2009 |
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the creative labor of this poem yields the effort of potent poetic sweat ...
magnificent imagery ...
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/27/2009 |
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I truly felt this one, in summer years ago my wife and I would often spend our summer vacations raking blueberries to get enough for school supplies in the fall for our three children. It was backbreaking, wet in the morning with the morning dew and burning hot when the sun comes out and we earned every dime.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/27/2009 |
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Splendid imagery,Jon, I could feel the sweat of your brow!
You write with such command of your subject! Bravo!
Love,
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/27/2009 |
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If anyone does not get a sore back from reading this, yes you captured real work, very few will know today. Great one Jon!
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
5/27/2009 |
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| Oh my..as always sweet Jon...Excellent writing from a wonderful man....remember your always in my thoughts OK...Hugss,much love coming your way dear sweet Jon.. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/27/2009 |
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Beautiful colors and images in your lines, Jon, I don't think you can improve upon perfection. You bring the reader to the fields in vivid verse and make them feel the work; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
5/27/2009 |
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Jon, excellent write, so full of strong visuals and images. It reminded me of a time when I consorted with a group of migrant farm workers; picking peaches, knocking almonds and working the apple orchards. I was still in high school but it didn't take much to notice the strain of life on their faccs. Nice writing.
Cheers,
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
5/27/2009 |
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I grew up on a working farm in south Ga. I didn't look forward to the first part of summer all that much because I had to pick and haul watermelons and cantalopes. I busted my butt. I tried my hand at picking cotton one year but I decided that I was better off in school.
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
5/27/2009 |
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| aah..only a magic wand can do away the toil and turmoil.. wonderful imagination of the aftermath of peasants working in the fields.. good wishes jon. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/26/2009 |
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Jon, your carefully orchestrated words paint an accurate
portrait of the peasant folks who live and die by their
baskets. As always, excellent. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/26/2009 |
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Wonderfully reflective piece of one who has worked hard all his life and now wants to ease back and time will not allow, very moving....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/26/2009 |
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Thank you, Jon, I'm honoured for the mention, and a fine poem it is...yes, if only the baskets would fill themselves...minor miracles may bring more relief than great ones.
John |
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