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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
10/6/2009 |
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| Love at the beach, of how abstoundingly wonderful to experience it. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
7/5/2009 |
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Beautifully written, Jon! Love all the descriptive words you have penned in this...thank you for taking us on this adventure of love (albeit surreptitiously :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/4/2009 |
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Wonderful. So glad to see you back.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/2/2009 |
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The fine imagery imprints the aura of this piece, Jon. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
7/1/2009 |
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hi Jon,reading your write after a very long time...its beautiful, what picture of gulls...wow!!!
best wishes
neerja |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/1/2009 |
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B e a u t i f u l !!! Images rock, man. T h a n k . y o u !!
<3 Phyllis <3 |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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A great poem,excellent work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/30/2009 |
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| WOO HOO!!! Sure got me wishing I was on "Some Beach, Somewhere," as the country singer Blake Shelton sings! HOT HOT HOT!! :) |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/30/2009 |
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The beauty of the setting only enhances the romance being played out in this night made for lovers...soft and gently sensual, Jon Michael
love and peace to you, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/30/2009 |
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Intimate and peaceful. That last line is perfection. Love the image of one indent in the sand. Conjures images all of its own. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/29/2009 |
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| A beauty. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/29/2009 |
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Jon,
You haven't missed a beat, it's so good to see you back posting. All of us will love this passionate, romantic poem with its eloquent and intimate expression, and I know Gene is honoured. A beauty here.
John |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
6/29/2009 |
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Very romantic and wonderfully written Jon. BRAVO!
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/29/2009 |
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I don't believe there is anything more romantic than a stroll on a beach holding hands...well written my friend.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/29/2009 |
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Jon, your return on the "roll of advancing tide and crashing waves"
would be happiness enough, but I'm overwhelmed and honored by the preface to your impassioned Beach Affair. In the rush I feel in the staccato effect of the short lines of your poem I sense the crashing of the waves and the imprint of love-making on the sand...
rustling dune grass
gossips our deeds
to the eavesdropping
sandpipers and crabs
Welcome back, my friend. You return in great style. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/29/2009 |
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Jon, this is such a wonderful write from first word to the last.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/29/2009 |
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Jon,
Where have you been? I've missed you! Glad you haven't lost your touch - this is beautiful. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/29/2009 |
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Welcome back Jon!You've been missed...Love this "Beach Affair"
like I love the ocean,they go together so beautifully;-)
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/29/2009 |
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:) good to see you back Jon...and what a treat this...wonderful imagery!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/29/2009 |
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and thank you for taking me there Jon!
"Beach Affair" is a beautiful dance & an endearing embrace....
Embraced~Embrassι
Vickie
(psst....Glad Your Back!) |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
6/29/2009 |
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Jon, are you sure you aren't plagerizing one of the love poems written to his mistress in Argentina by the S.C Governor?
Steamy write that made me thing about current events.......lol
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
6/29/2009 |
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| Woow this is very romantic and I applaud you for the superb selection of words as well as the smooth flow of the verses. Missed you sσ much brother. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/29/2009 |
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Great write, Jon; you done good! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D |
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