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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/28/2009 |
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Jon,
This reminds me of the way I feel when I let a regret or piece of guilt take over my mind. These things can drag us down and even make us feel as though we don't deserve happiness. Just my reaction to this poem. Poe would have smiled:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/26/2009 |
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| I can feel the depths of dispair in this sad hearttouching poem! Tomorrow is another day and with it comes the hope of a better and brighter one . Blessings to you....M |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/26/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
7/26/2009 |
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Very well written sweet Jon... my prayers and love are with you ..please remember this I am always here if you need me...Please let me know how you you are OK..I posted a poem yesterday I hope it brings a smile to your face...so busy these days really dont have much time for anything,so much sickness in our world and sometimes I feel totally useless...sighhh..take care my sweet friend I adore..Hugsss and Kisses coming your way....sighhh....please stay safe and keep smiling ..OK
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/25/2009 |
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| a deep sense of supernal battle and emotional turmoil ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/22/2009 |
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I do hope this is fine artistry and not true biography.
Stay well.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/22/2009 |
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Dear Jon, if the writing were not so powerful, so gripping, yes,
and a bit frightening, I'd be concerned. Actually I am. But this
is so well crafted, my friend, that I read in admiration the depth
of your talent to explore the the demons that often haunt us all.
My thoughts, as you know, are with you. -gene.
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
7/22/2009 |
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This had a dark and haunting feel to it, a little different that your usual style but excellent, as always Jon Michael
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
7/22/2009 |
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oh the depths of your muse Jon!!! I Love It!!
Intertwining, mingling...proding emotions to be felt...
revealing suspense, leaving me suspended...
Wonderful Darkled Edifice...peering into an abyss..
let us light a candle to see the cursing presence
Love & Inspirations!
Vickie :) |
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| Reviewed by Janice Beaty Springs |
7/22/2009 |
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| I've wrestled with this joker before, in each battle I claim victory... beautifully written... you continue to amaze me! Blessings, Janice Beaty Springs |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/22/2009 |
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Jon, sadly those demons do persist. They return all too frequently and stay like an unwatned relative visiting and never leaving. An excellent job of writing. Peace be with you.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
7/22/2009 |
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The worst Demons we ever have to face are our own. Nice work Jon.
~W~ |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/22/2009 |
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Dark write but so well done it reflects the author's ability to present drama and imagery perfectly. Well done.
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/22/2009 |
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Excellent work Jon,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/21/2009 |
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| In the tunnel of depression one has to se through the abyss or be lost within its confines of our own prison. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/21/2009 |
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Such a dark and deep place for one to be, one step away from the bowels of depression. I pray that you are okay....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/21/2009 |
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Jon,
This has the terrible passion one reads in Hopkins's dark sonnets, and the beauty, too; "...more compelling than desire for my next breath," haunts me, troubles me and yet in that strange marvellous way great writing has lifts me up, the words transcending the very thought.
This is splendid writing.
John |
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