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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
8/10/2009 |
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| Many writeres dance to the tune of the mighty pen in a variety of thoughts and ideas, consepts and visions, opening their souls to exposure of many elements......M.. Good write! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/3/2009 |
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The pipes, the pipes, O, the pipes! Such a thrilling write, Jon, that stirs the blood - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/2/2009 |
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with calls to glory they entice weak souls
those to be imprisoned
Your poem is an indictment of humanity; it is an open book to its folly. Thank you, Jon. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/2/2009 |
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A haunting dirge to call forth the weak and unsure to follow mindlessly...brilliant writing, Jon Michael
Peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/1/2009 |
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We are easy followers of men. So often to our death and shame. Thanks for reminding us.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/1/2009 |
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How true, Jon Michael, it's all a song and dance , isn't it?
You show us both the beauty and the beast of it all, Splendid write!
ET |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
8/1/2009 |
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John I saved this one consider it a compliment to such an all out effort, the poem reads like a rose opening it's pedals to the morning sun, and the mockingbird singing trallaalllalallala indeed.
You have reached in deep, and brought much wisdom, as your colourful words climb like a vine to reach the summit.
Bless You! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
7/31/2009 |
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| This brought memories for me of some of the warnings (unheeded) in the briliant poems of the WW1 poets, finely written, it shows your obvious skill and knowledge- I always know when I read you that it will be great writing without fail. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/31/2009 |
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Yes, the sound of the fife will conjure up many feeling both old and new in times of struggle and strife. Your words I find haunting for the message they carry....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/31/2009 |
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Jon,
'...a pibroch sad to play'...maybe it's just my reading but I find this unsettling and haunting and the more than once use of tra-la, tra-la, ironic; that's no reflection on the skill of delivery and the excellent images, in fact it's your great ability to draw response from the reader, a response that I think matters. Gene's right, this is warning.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/31/2009 |
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...there really are no sounds like it..almost haunting in their beauty...and always sing a story..it is no wonder.
Love and Peace
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
7/31/2009 |
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and in these haunting presences; carriers of "Of Pipers and Men" the voice of equisite expression etches upon our soul to hear the feelings of emotionality...Your Words Jon, are so very moving!!
This poetic offering is felt....
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/31/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
7/31/2009 |
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| Oh my...I love the pipes as well... sure does do something to me when I hear them...well done as always sweet Jon....Hugsss,much love to you ....Keep smiling OK..sighhh |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/31/2009 |
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Thanks for the warning, Jon. I'm captivated by your lines
to the point that I may well march off with the next piper who
invades my neighborhood...tra-la tra-la, tra-le tra-le. This
is music to my ears, my friend. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/31/2009 |
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| They do raise your spirits as you see them walk by and the pipes sound is with you so long. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/31/2009 |
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I love dearly the pipes and when I hear them their is a haunting feeling or sometimes a feeling that it is a call to arms...
fee |
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