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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
8/23/2009 |
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Cute and well-written. There is much substance in the words of the poem, defining the work of the poet.
Might the Bic people offer a fortune for this one?
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
8/20/2009 |
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Really proud of your progress from the early days. You are doing quite well in the cerebral poetry department.
Walt
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/20/2009 |
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| I LOVE this poem, but stop your chase Jon for poetry has mastered you. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/18/2009 |
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I love this one, Jon. I recently wrote an ode to my pen. Unfortunately, I left the page in my pocket and it went through the wash. Forever lost. Wasn't nearly as good as this tribute, though. There's a sense of focus throughout this poem. I kept thinking...steady...steady. Also a great hint of humor in these lines. Well done! Hugs,
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/15/2009 |
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Ah, you aspire to the ancient art of writing poetry with a ball point pen. I cast many a colored felt tip into fire after scribbling many a tome, now fading into a uniform brown on yellowing paper. Far from tongue-in-cheek, I sense a sadness that ink on paper is becoming obsolete.
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/15/2009 |
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Whatever implement you use to put your masterful verse to paper, only graces the reader with your talent, Jon Michael...
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/14/2009 |
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Jon,you are a master poet,and I love
to read your work! It is always superb! |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
8/14/2009 |
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| Jon - Excellent tribute. I hate to think of the mess I would have made with a quill. My Pilot G-9 would have been a miracle to Shakespeare. - David |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
8/14/2009 |
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As always sweet man Excellent writing..leaving for a couple of weeks on medical business..remember your always in my thoughts OK....stay safe and always well..Hugss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
8/14/2009 |
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| Ahhhh so witty........enjoyed the ending.......this is very smart!!! enjoyed.......A |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
8/14/2009 |
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OHHhhhh....Jon....you saturate my senses with poetic beauty!
This poem is like a tender caress to the soul of all poets!
BEAUTIFUL......Elloquent Perfection!
I am dipped! :)
Peace, Love & Inspirations!
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
8/13/2009 |
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| Your pen does not stop woth its flow of ink words. Well said Jon...M |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/13/2009 |
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Jon, you have a most obedient quill, so faithful (at least in this
happy instance) to the poetry that leaps from your mind...drip free.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
8/13/2009 |
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This dear Jon, deserves an eagle feather, drip free or not, bravo!
Blessings! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/13/2009 |
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| don't fail me now.....this is really a neat read Jon flows without flaw! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
8/13/2009 |
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| Original, clever and well written! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/13/2009 |
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A wwriter relies almost as much on his equipment as he does on his inspirations. pens, pencils, computers, recorders, dictionairies, and reference books all play a big part in bringint even the simplest of ideas to life. A muse can find many places to reside and wheter it is in a Bic or a brain...the important thing is we believe...
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/12/2009 |
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Such a clever tribute to the pen! Highly original, Jon; I loved it! Very well done; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
8/12/2009 |
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Hi Jon,
Great to read your work after a very long time...and very impressive...not just to paper with your skills...but to elsewise people too...beautifully written. loved it.
Best wishes
Neerja |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/12/2009 |
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Jon,
What a writer needs, a drip free pen. Or fingers that don't make mistakes. Sometimes, we are our own harshest critics - a stunningly original piece you share with us today, that resonates, because it is so true! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/12/2009 |
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Awwww, Jon this is fantastic!! What a gem of originality...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
8/12/2009 |
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Jon,
That was adorable. you might say...."well penned"
Mary |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/12/2009 |
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| The pens of old used to smudge and drip and leak but your mind with a bic comes across smoothly and articulately. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/12/2009 |
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Jon,
Delightful worthwhile romp all the way from 'avian defined piece' - so good, that - to drip free BIC. I love where this goes and how I'm carried along on its eloquent flow.
John |
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