|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Sounds like a fresh start. I like how you tied the color of the snow to feelings or ideas. Hugs,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|This is as perfect as a drifted snow! Stunning.|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Great poem, Jon! Into my library it goes! Merry Christmas ... and thanks!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A truly splendid poem depicting Christmas against the artistry of natures pristine snow and how swiftly it departs/ A lush poem from a golden pen, Jon michael!
Blessings of a Christmas and New Year,filled with Love for you and your loved ones!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A wonderful rendition of nature's first winter symphony of white, Jon. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Pristine flow of consciousness here, Jon. Love the drift, the float and fall of ideas that blend and merge to blur the mental landscapes. Definitely white lush here and not slush... I LOVE that contrast: captures the moment of revelation and inspiration wonderfully - before the images melt away... xx|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|There is something about the first snowfall of the season that brings out the poets in many of us...but your brilliant piece captured the moment beautifully, thank you for sharing with us
Peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Jon, this is a whitewash when you are up to your balls in it, I am protesting..... it sure is a good cheerful write, sitting by the fireside, you needs to get some sleep my friend. Peace and Love for the HOLY days! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|oops...whoops...great december's brush...good wishes friend Jon|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Jon, I'm with Karen on this one...but such a lovely write.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Magical really,,,,great write Jon,,,Merry Christmas to you and your family
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Thank you, Jon. Your poetic description of December's first
snowfall to blanket our Eastern shores makes it a beautiful way
to welcome Christmas. You do marvelous things with your pen.
Snow, snow, snow, and more to come before this night is done.
A grateful fan, gene.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|More than a light dusting...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You know it sounds so beautiful, yet I really don't miss the snow. Gos bless and have a joyous week ahead....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Gotta love this one, I can actually handle the snow but I do really hate ther frigid cold temps of the last few days.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|ohhh... "puritancal" what a beautiful word Jon!!
within every line the beauty of
you poetic magic further unfolds
Love & Blessings within your
"puritanical veil of white" (so utterly gorgeous!)
|Reviewed by Alexandra Midnight
|A great tribute to the first snow fall of winter.Great write.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|We are waiting the first blizzard of the season that is due to hit us today and tomorrow, this poem is a painting of what awaits me to see. Good one Jon.