|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|"She" is a treasure as is this poem.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Oh God Jon!!
I am definitely saving this one!
it IS a work of the heart..and THAT is the art of arts!
..am saving this! YES!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|‘til she held my hand these drunken feet
knew not the harmony of tolerant dance
peg legs now glide in the flourish of tests
she leads I follow performing above my best
I have seldom read a more touching, eloquent or visual depiction of the esprit of love than this uplifting dance, Jon. The decorated language is so light and musical it truly plays a waltz on the heartstrings! There is an awe and a wonder here, too, that also makes it feel like hallowed ground. Just beautiful! :)) xx
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
So beautifully written, as are all your poems. She's a lucky woman.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THEY SAY THAT OPPOSITES ATTRACT...SEEMS IN THIS CASE, IT IS ALSO A HUGE BLESSING...FROM ABOVE. MUCH FAITH AND LOVE TO YOU AND YOURS. THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...I bet those drunken feet soberbed up and and gave a performance of five stars plus...love this poem! dance on...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|The combo of humour and the candid expression of passion is simply marvelous. And, like most blokes, I totally relate to this.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|An offering as flowing as a Viennese
Walz would be Your dance!!! *Jon*
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Indeed! The right person will do wonders for one's self and life outlook; I speak from recent experience, Jon. Thank you for sharing, my friend. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Outstanding writing Jon Michael, the right partner for any dance makes all the difference.
Peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Yes indeed, masterfully you pull the strings together of that special spirit that makes the puppet dance, I can fully relate to this, for I know that truth. Bless ya Jon!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I cannot relate, my friend, for I always led the dance. On the other hand, for those shy on the dance floor it takes a great woman to lead them out. As my ability to walk waned, I found a strong woman who helped me survive a continual fall as we pirouetted across the floor, amazing the audience with the power of the dance that was all hers, to my relief.
Beautifully written with a remarkably unique set of phrases.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You relate masterfully, this is splendid!
Such wonderful lines "Her crown atop my pate a gratuity/her disposition anoints rascally types"
Blessings this Thanksgiving and always,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"..tolerance persuades a saint's etiquette"
now there's a thought and line to die for..
and that final line "...performing above my best'
is, too, masterly. Here, Jon, My Friend,
you perform magnificently, this is a poem
to savour and save.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|love leads the way and all we can do is follow in its dance and hope we can keep on step ...
passionate perfection ...
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Jon, this an awsome description of a real friend,
And by the way, a keeper.