|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Profound and intriguing. She must be quite a lady who has learned the art of flirting an socializing.Enjoyed the poem....M|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Deliciously mysterious, Jon. Love the comparison of her eyes to the hummingbird. That visual came alive! You've made her sound intense, interesting, and seductive. You make us want to know her too. Enjoyed...mucho:)
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I am sure you have many guessing, Jon. I can think of more than one to whom this could allude. In any case, I am intrigued and I thank you for awakening thoughts and emotions. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|A wonderful tribute to "her." This is absolutely smoldering.
God bless you.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Amazing dedication. If I was to take a guess I would think it would be the highly amazing Kate Burnside. Even if not, blimey, you should meet the stunning woman. Yet I can't think of anyone else who reaches such heights of admiration.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Whoever she is she must be very special indeed. Stunning poem Jon.|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|DON'T TELL US, JON, KEEP US GUESSING! SHE SOUNDS...INTRIGUING(SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You've got the guessing… Now I am intrigued!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Chocolate eyes pooling entranced by your marvelous verses..
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very intriguing indeed..well it can't be me, I have green eyes, darn, lol very nicely done!!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|beautiful ode...intriguing tooo.. Happy new Year. :)neerja|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Lucky gal! :))))
Beautiful weave of the heart..
well done Jon!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Such a brown eyed lady you describe
would be very proud! *Jon* I hope
that she knows how you feel!!
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|She intrigues me too, Jon. I'm a sucker for chocolate.
Beautifully done, my friend. -gene.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|intoxicating, dangerous, delightful... she certainly has brought the deftest of articulation to your pen which dances her homage across the page. Strength and daintiness in equal measure, her high-wire captivation is enthralling. We as readers are greatly blessed by this lady's power to intrigue you; the kinetic energy that transmits from your words is immense! Compelling and passionate... DELICIOUS! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You have written a riddle for us! It is a beautifully lovely image you paint of someone chocolate eyed here in our midst, an exquisite poem Jon...
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|"With a glassblower's deftness." The image is immediate and clear.
Van Morrison's "Brown Eyed Girl" dosen't hold a clandle to this.
Although this might be a bit harder to put to music, it has a music of it's own. Brown eyes are a wonder of nature for sure. Dark and mysterious, or light brown and expressive, lovely they are.
Happy New Year, Jon......
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|What a lovely tribute to a chocolate eyed lady...you will have all of the brown eyed authors wondering who could it be. fascinating poem, Jon Michael, as always.
Much peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|I can only imagine sweet marshmallows are melting in some chocolate eyes after she reads this...what a stunning tribute to someone that must be very special...beautiful Jon..and a Happy New Year~
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing...hehehe..had to smile...being one with brown eyes...made me flutter my eyes...lol
|Reviewed by jude forese
|chocolate eyes, sweet and alluring ... intrigue captures the lure of the heart ... soulful write, Jon ... good to see you posting ...|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|I very much enjoyed "She Intrigues Me" and I imagine readers will be intrigued as well.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Are you smoking grass, sweet grass, dear friend, are you riding a horse backward, what got into you, you're falling in love ha?
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Nice to read you here, Jon Michael. She intrigues you and your poem intrigues me, as a reader. Still trying to figure it out...