The You
by Tony Jenkins
Friday, February 15, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A silly little poem I wrote for my wife in Jan 08.
I kinda like it though. |
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All I really want for you
Is for you to be you
Not the you every one expects
Just you
The you that knows the inside you
The you, who wants to be set free
The you that loves you
The you that let's it be
The real you
The new you
The old you
The do you ?
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/11/2008 |
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| Says a lot of how you think of your wife and want her to be the best wife for you. To love you always, stay with you and help you and do mighty things for you. She probably will never change if you want her to be like this. I love this poem too, cause I had love with Tom and just wanted him to be happy and himself, which he was every day of his life with me. SMoked himself to death and I told him so but he did not care, so I stopped nagging him and eventually lost him on Aug 17 07 but his spirit is with me still and always will be. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
2/16/2008 |
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| It is so wonderful when you can be who you are and your mate still loves you. Great job in saying it so beautifully. Love, Bonnie |
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