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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/17/2007 |
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| You are a master in expression through the abstract imagery that penetrates the soul. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/24/2007 |
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when we observe the questionable and our reaction is forceful yet speculative our conclusions of life will often lead us in circles ...
cleverly penned, Tracie ... |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
3/22/2007 |
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Hi Tracey,
I read this from work and couldn't comment...you changed the last stanza, but it is actually tighter and more poignant this way. Not to say the original didn't work, just that ending it with "ellipses" really "shows" the meaning. Very tight and concise! |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/22/2007 |
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| Yes Tracey, this is so. ;) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/22/2007 |
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| Tracey this is a brillaint piece of poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/22/2007 |
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| I like it, Tracey; very well done! :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/22/2007 |
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Clever one, and very well said.
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/22/2007 |
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Well said....gotta love the picture!!
Oh body language to me is a dead givaway!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
3/22/2007 |
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Well said...Loved it,
Michael |
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