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Tracey L Hardie

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Body Language
by Tracey L Hardie
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Body Language


The old man stands
like a question-mark
against the day.

 

I watch him
like an exclamation-point
in wonderment,

 

only to conclude
that life ends
with an ellipses...



 
 
 

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor
You are a master in expression through the abstract imagery that penetrates the soul.
Reviewed by jude forese
when we observe the questionable and our reaction is forceful yet speculative our conclusions of life will often lead us in circles ...

cleverly penned, Tracie ...
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Hi Tracey,

I read this from work and couldn't comment...you changed the last stanza, but it is actually tighter and more poignant this way. Not to say the original didn't work, just that ending it with "ellipses" really "shows" the meaning. Very tight and concise!
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Yes Tracey, this is so. ;)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Tracey this is a brillaint piece of poetry!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I like it, Tracey; very well done! :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Clever one, and very well said.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Well said....gotta love the picture!!

Oh body language to me is a dead givaway!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
Well said...Loved it,

Michael
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