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Tracey L Hardie

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Curb Appeal
by Tracey L Hardie

Monday, April 09, 2007
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Curb Appeal

You made me     feel
like a paper cup
filled    with steamy hot liquid

later       cold and discarded
by the wayside of yesterday’s dreams
left            to decay.
   

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/17/2007
So much said...with perfection. Mastercrafted as only you can, Tracie. Love,
Amor
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 4/12/2007
Exceptional writing!
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 4/12/2007
Excellant pen of misfortune
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/11/2007
You nailed this one!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci 4/10/2007
Hmm! Paper
lets see paper comes from trees
trees grown from nature's love and care
then man comes in and beats them to a pulp
egro paper

Cup as in Cups of tarot usually to do with love or emotion
some filling over some spilled

So we have love that has been beaten to a pulp

Yes I see

thats why I prefer Styrofoam
Reviewed by Dale Clark 4/10/2007
Ooooo is right. You hit the nail on the head.
Unfortunately. And as Eilizabeth said Say little,
but say it well. Which you accomplished. Great!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/10/2007
Ouch. This hurts to the core. You must never hurt like this. Just be well and know you are loved,



Regis
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/9/2007
Ooooooo now that hurts! So demeaning!

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/9/2007
Stark reality! Tracie your analogy is superbly crafted!

Eileen
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/9/2007
Say little, but say it well. Celtic proverb.

And you certainly did that. Excellent.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by richard cederberg 4/9/2007
A fine description of the transitory qualities of loveless lust.

Light and Wisdom ...
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