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Searching for the Right Words by Tracey L Hardie Saturday, May 24, 2008 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan .

Searching for the right words My fingers curl around thoughts… creating indentations in more than one way. My pen— a prisoner with life sentence condemned by words or lack of them! The page is empty. The words— clumsy like a child, a jokester, a madman, or a psycho. My thoughts— my friend, my lover, my enemy never leaves me even when I rest my thoughts provoke and explore the possibilities... My poor pen— silently knows my minds mêlée of finding just the right words and my paper— suffers the pressure, I feel its pain, the embracement of infertility and the page... remains empty!

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor	5/28/2012

You are never at a lack for words that can mesmerize and move...write a book already!!!! Always, Amor




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	5/26/2008

Very nicely expressed, Tracey. I have recently posted something along the same theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you, Regis




Reviewed by Dale Clark	5/25/2008

Yes it's true of any poet, just finding the right words to express the 'minds m�l�e' Great poem Tracey.




Reviewed by Gene Williamson	5/25/2008

Well, Tracey, you did a great job of filling up this page. I like your poem and, perhaps more important, I love the way you write. - Gene.