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Unusual
by Tracey L Hardie

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Unusual

The day was ending quietly,
the phone never rang.
I sat on the front porch
trying to understand.

Clouds bellowed,
I noticed there were no birds,
silence with the exception
of a gentle breeze that stirred.

Was a storm churning,
raging in distant miles?
I thought about “you”
and our tribulations and trials.

We thought nothing
could change our path,
we knew our love
would always last.

The love lasted
but we did not,
time changed
the way we thought.

Why I thought of you now
in this moment of time,
left me to awed thoughts
until I heard the church bells chime.

I cannot remember hearing
them ring this time of day,
I thought how “unusual”
and my thoughts of you faded away.


Copyright 2002 Tracey L. Hardie

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Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/28/2002
10-28-02


This Is One Of Your Best___

Thanks, Your Comments!

TRASK
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 10/26/2002
Well done. Thanks for memories.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/24/2002
Hi Tracey,

This is very good and I love, love, love this stanza.

The love lasted
but we did not,
time changed
the way we thought.

My best to you, Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 10/24/2002
terrible how what was once love can change
like the winds around us
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 10/24/2002
she looks like she is searching for someone.
This was enchanting.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 10/24/2002
What a masterful painting. Couldn't take my eyes away from it. And your feelings match the intensity of the portrait. Bill
Reviewed by Diana Bennett (Reader) 10/24/2002
There are such a balanced range of emotions expressed. Very nice.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 10/24/2002
Poignant beauty of a write...
Reviewed by Larry Skahill 10/24/2002
awesome
I heard the chimes too
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 10/24/2002
tracey,
Thsi is a lovely write. Sad yet somehow calming. I like the flow and images alot.
Drkman

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 10/24/2002
nice...I can almost hear the quiet...and the chimes
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 10/24/2002
Tracey, I very much enjoy your writing.
Jack
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 10/24/2002
Love the thoughts here contained.

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