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Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

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9-11 (a senyru)
by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Friday, September 13, 2002

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l.

twin missles do strike--
flames exploding brightly now--
terrorist attack!!

ll.

shuddering in pain--
screaming in a cry of fright--
the twin towers fall.

lll.

many brave souls die--
trying to save countless lives--
heroes now, our saints.

iv.

america mourns--
thry cry for our fallen dead--
"let us NOT forget!"

this is my first attempt at writing senyru.


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Reviewed by Joel Sattler 9/29/2010
nice
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/30/2007
Great senyru. In so few words you summed up 9/11 so powerfully. You brought it to life again. The sacrifice of so many who died and those that worked at the site and are dying now because of all the toxins they inhaled. excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Erin Collins 4/19/2007
Karen,
A vivid yet succinct poem that tells so much about the tragedy of September 11!
Indeed, "heroes now, our saints."
Well done.

Aurora Collins
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 12/28/2006
Well done, Linda! By the way, you come up on the listings when we put "senyru poems" into the Google browser. Not bad! "9-11 (a senryu)" will remain timely. No one needs to ever label you "disabled," for your writings show how enabled you are. You are making Texas proud. Write on!

Ted
Reviewed by Cynthia Jones 5/2/2006
Karen, it was definately a tragic day for America. I live in Canada and it hurt me deeply as well. :'o( Great Senyru's. *S* Cynthia
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 4/20/2006
Okay, I am really behind I have no idea how I missed this, but it's great.
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/14/2002
Wow this is great, I never did senyru, but i've read a lot of it. and the subject matter was so touching...well done. Floria
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/14/2002
Well done! A day no one can forget. Thanks for your comments. HUGS!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 9/14/2002
stark, true, bare-boned. It shot right through me. a good write. this subject is like a moving target and youve got a bullseye! katy.
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 9/14/2002
"heroes now...our saints" And we will NOT forget! Thanks for this, Karen. A loving tribute, well-written.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 9/14/2002
So excellent Karen.......
Reviewed by Lee Garrett 9/13/2002
What exactly is a senyru, and the structure defining it? The words new to me. Like the bare bones elegance of your simplicity. The restraint was amazing considering the subject matter. Well done.
Reviewed by Lee Garrett 9/13/2002
simple and very effective...excellent job
Reviewed by Timothy Flaherty 9/13/2002
Nicely done for a first attempt. Great imagery.

Tim
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/13/2002
what a wonderful job!!!!
very proud you are!!!
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 9/13/2002
Karen, you did a fantastic job on such a dreadful event.
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 9/13/2002
Oh Karen, So Beautiful.

Joel
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/13/2002
(((karen))) great imagery...may we always remember and never forget. WELL DONE!! ((((HUGS)))) and much love, karla. :(
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