by VicToria Freudiger
Thursday, November 06, 2003
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To understand yourself enough to let others love you, isn't that a wonderment
I want to be independent, but captured
I want to be let loose, but kept close
I want to listen for hours, but not be ignored
I want to touch your hand, feel your embrace
Out under the moon at the beach, near the water,
Let's listen to the sounds of the sand
I want to lean down and touch that area
Of your shoulders where your wings may
Someday be attached. Please dear Thomas
Take my breath away - why don't you?
I'll sleep a little longer, be more relaxed…
Now that I've told you who I am.
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|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|What a beautiful write you have shared with us here....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Victoria this is a very lovely piece of poetry!
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Reviewed by Tamara Dailey-Keur
|VicToria, this piece is so full of passion and love. Thomas is the luckiest man alive to have someone as wonderful as you. Your talents come from deep within... The very heart of pure talent. You are blessed my friend and through your words you bless others.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Enjoyed this very much, VicToria!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|VicToria, beautiful write. Many don't know who they are so your well established. Brava!|