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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/30/2002 |
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| sounds like you be singing the body electric ;) |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
9/30/2002 |
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you do back and in...out and forth writing so well.....daytime momma...night-time daddy
excellent!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) |
9/30/2002 |
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"Its called the grind
Sore feet in dress shoes
Pictures in the wallet that look familiar
But who the fuk is that?" you have truly captured the life of the middle class worker. Excellent write!
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
9/30/2002 |
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| Excellent poem! Bill |
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| Reviewed by Margie Hess |
9/30/2002 |
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| as always i enjoy anything you write (and your spelling is still atrocious) keep writing... |
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