|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sometimes when there are dark clouds and storms raging within us the best thing we can do is face the fury of the world head on as to put things into some sort of manic sense. I felt your pain but also in the vague images of that pain I see a little glimmer of hope. Well done write.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice images. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|This poem, again ,(as did your last,) touched me at my core with its deep burning honesty,passion,and,pain...you are indeed a first class poet and one I admire greatly.
best wishes always,
and a sisterly hug too ,
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Absolutley stunning! excellent imagery amplifies this dark write superbly. Lori I'm impressed, I thought I had the handle on them lol but you've out done me here, Kudos!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Powerful in imagery and sentiments expressed; the mood is most effectively created, Lori. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|Wow for a 7 min free write, this is spectacular. Such vivid imagery.
|Reviewed by J M
|This is excellent nice flow and rythmn I like the ending so well and the visuals very creative poetry!!!!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I hope the storm passes soon - quite a poem.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|You need a heart of gold to bring love and compassion back into your life Lori
Draw closer to God and he will bring you your heart's desire !