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Books
· Beneath the Paler Sun 2nd Release

· Ballyhoo! 2nd release

· Poetry Carnival


Short Stories
· Carnival Nights PART 3

· Carnival Nights PART 2

· Tiger's Eye

· Sleep with one eye Open

· Carnival Nights PART 1


Articles
· Spectacular Attractions Offers More Than Spectaculars

· As Clear as Glass for Wabash Valley Shows

· Swan Song of the Bearcreek Country Fair

· Pappy: Interview with the Carny


Poetry
· Columbines at Christmas

· Independence (1999)

· Never Witness Joplin

· I Wanna Live Life Again

· My Crystal ball sees only the Past

· Beware the Metal Boogieman

· Wreck

· Wertz's Bar

· Shuttin' These Words Down

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  Murky Dream
by Lori S. Maynard
Sunday, December 06, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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I fell, a pale shadow, stretched o'er the ground.
Light barely touching the lost soul within.
Blades of grass twisting beneath my weight.
Heart broken...dreams forgotten...life's own sin.

Shine your light and disperse the darkness.
Don't let me lay forgotten in the sunlight
facedown in puddles of murky dreams
of things once loved…now lost…from sight.

©October 5, 2009 Lori Maynard

-Unfinished poem




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Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
Still nicely written. Enjoyed.

Tom
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Even in its "unfinished" state, this poem is most compelling, Lori. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
I'd like to see where this one goes. The beginning is promising. Look forward to more, Lori - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Fascinating write, Lori. Dream on.... -gene.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Don't give up, finish this poem. I see you have loads of talent. I will remember you!

GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A well Penned Unfinished poem
Most enjoyable reading
Love & Peace be with you

William
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