|Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
|Still nicely written. Enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Even in its "unfinished" state, this poem is most compelling, Lori. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I'd like to see where this one goes. The beginning is promising. Look forward to more, Lori - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Fascinating write, Lori. Dream on.... -gene.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Don't give up, finish this poem. I see you have loads of talent. I will remember you!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A well Penned Unfinished poem
Most enjoyable reading
Love & Peace be with you