|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Brava!! Brava!! Thank you!!!|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|I enjoyed the use of colorful words in this, it really brought it to life and made it feel so visual. Great work!|
|Reviewed by Ann Piatt
|This is a very creative spin on love that has come to a standstill. And yes, i do agree...i think there where love once lived...and now sleeps...it can be awakened to live once more. Beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|This is sooooo beautiful, and I agree with Lady Peg about absolutely loving the mixture of colors with everything! Simpley OUTSTANDING and TRUE DEEP WORK!!!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I love how you stir the colors with emotions the memories and the defeats the joys and the romance how life is so real here in these beautiful verses...............
Deeply I was too moved i want to write like this one day!!!!
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Outstanding write, Marion.
Your verses moved me deeply.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this, outstanding and deep,
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This most excellent write is much deeper that its surface reveals. Wonderfully done.