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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
5/15/2012 |
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| You have some good descriptions of the long hazy days of summer as the song says, Lois. I like how you have run summer days into one word. It suits your poem. Cheers |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
4/14/2012 |
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| Life as it is, wonderful reflection. You will love England. |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/12/2010 |
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A heartfelt and outstanding poem Lois!
Much appreciated too! May the God of all
comfort, continue to comfort and sustain
you each day! Thank you for sharing so
powerfully!
Much Love,
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
2/9/2009 |
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| I was really wrapped up in your poem, Lois, but had to give special pause at the idea of eating a fried clam. If we ever have an AD reunion, I invite you to bring clams, lots of 'em. I'm with you on not favoring the cold weather and short days--bring on the spring---Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
1/31/2009 |
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Lois,
Cold weather blues can get you down for sure. I remember. Enjoyed your write.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
1/28/2009 |
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You do an excellent job in this poem, of showing the grandeur and beauty and depth of everyday life. I think everyday is a gift from God, and you certainly have a way with words to capture that well.
Keep translating your soul into words,Lois,keep touching others. : )
Zach |
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| Reviewed by G Fralin |
1/27/2009 |
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| Oh boy, do I know winter. This has a lot of life emotion in it. I love the imagery. There is saddenss, humor, joy, and lonliness. You just about covered all the bases. Good read. Thanks for writing it. |
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| Reviewed by Stephanie Murray |
1/26/2009 |
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I can relate,I work hard to fight off those winter blues. Iliked your poem.
Stephanie |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
1/26/2009 |
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Dear Losis,
A wonderful trubute to your loved one.
I am very saddened by your loss of Tom, he was truly a great man.
I lost my first wife over twenty years ago.
The story about her is on the den "A Slice of a Short Life."
It took me 20 years to write, I hope you can read it one day.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/24/2009 |
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Most apt and timely thoughts well-shared, Lois. Thank you. Stay warm. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
1/23/2009 |
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This poem reflects the state of mind of the writer, as she projects her light out into the cosmos.
Was that glowing Halley's comet that flew by?
No, Lois J. Christiansen lit up a poet's sky! |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
1/22/2009 |
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| Yes lois we must stay busy, life is fun other than work. Make a snowman, snow angels, go ice skating, throw some snowballs, and enjoy Winter. Look up a watch Spring shinning on the horizon. Thanks for beauty. |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
1/21/2009 |
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God Bless you!
A moving, inspirational poem...
The journey sometimes places sharp turns in our road, "...forrad on, this is the way!", she says!
Stay warm, Spring will be here soon!
Enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
1/19/2009 |
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A lot of things going on in your world with winter, bingo, church activities, and of course, your trip to the cemetery. It's something I want to do soon because both my mom and dad passed away in January.
Sorry you lost your money at bingo... |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
1/18/2009 |
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| Aye, you've got the winter blues on the run, Lois! Snuggle up and spoil yourself a little, enjoy the Great Indoors with keyboard and mouse and great music playing. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/18/2009 |
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Keeping busy helps you to enjoy even the winter cold days Lois. Soon Spring and then Summer will arrive and we will wonder where winter had gone. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/18/2009 |
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| I am glad you are keeping busy. Thats the best way to beat them . I you have a hobby it might help also....Great picture of the northland!......M |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/18/2009 |
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I am fighting those winter blues off that people get,
By going hither and thither and not getting wet.
I think many are, right about now. Think Spring! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
1/17/2009 |
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| You go girl. Fun read. More. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/17/2009 |
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Lois,,, great action packed poem....stay warm and pink! :)
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
1/17/2009 |
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| Lois, these musings were fun to read, altho it was so cold and you lost your money, and you ventured to the gravesite...you know Tom loves you too. You got out of the house; didn't want to stay inside and grow numb...so at least you are doing things...the music is your love, and listen to what makes you happiest...I listen to allkinds of music, loud, noisy, sweet, romantic, kid stuff too... just enjoy it...and know you are loved by all... hugs, lindalaw |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/17/2009 |
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Yes I sometimes think that is the only cure, for the more I stay in and try to avoid the cold and snow the more my moody swings persist. So maybe you are right...embrace the weather and life will embrace us.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/17/2009 |
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| Not sure about the name of the car, but the rest sounds like a fun day or so...keep warm...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/17/2009 |
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| Hang in there Lois... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/17/2009 |
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| Just took the last of my antibiotic pills for Bronchitis which is getting to be a Winter illness I have been getting in the last 3 years. never had it before then. I'm with you when will Spring arrive? |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Watson |
1/17/2009 |
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I felt like going for a jacket while reading this...hehehe. I still enjoyed the day though and appreciate your growth as a poet. Stay warm.
Tom Watson |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/17/2009 |
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Lois,
This is so adorable. Thanks for sharing a part of your day with us.
You are such a sweet woman.
Stay warm,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
1/17/2009 |
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| Good Advice Lois. ...sometimes you need to be blue, the trick is not staying in there. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
1/17/2009 |
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Oh Lois this was delightful and you sure have grown as a poet. Love and hugs, Bonnie
Hooray for LOIS! |
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