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I Love Sun by Mark W Robertson Wednesday, April 10, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan I Love sun! Bright yellow paint gliding down the wallboard canvas Cutting through shades of old memories and promises left unfinished A new day a new colour a new glow I like sun on mybed mycupboard mytv myfishtank mycarpet mydesk AND mycat My hands got sun on em I like sun on myhead myknee mytoes myfeet and me I like sun on myhall,mybathroom,mystairs, mymom Mymom! Whatmom? Nuthinjustmakingsunshine EVERYPLACE! I LOVE SON! Iloveson counttoten Iloveson ANDWHEREDIDYOUGETTHEPAINT? idunno YOUPAINTEDTHETVTHEFISHTANKTHECARPETTHETOILET AND AND thecat. THECAT? WHY DID YOU DO THIS? Cos u love sun an said, an said iwasyoursunshine AN ulove lello Yellow. I just said lello! u love me anymoremum? Give me that paintbrush! Now lets finish painting your dads computer together then paintourselves into a great big hug I LOVE SUNSHINE very much.
This is the first time I've posted anything please email me if you think I should write some more. -Mark Robertson (entemark.hotmail.com)

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Reviewed by Marie Logan	4/10/2002

I thought this was very creative! It was hard to read in some parts, but I got the impression that was part of the effect. In any case, do post more :)




Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)	4/10/2002

I enjoyed this! And, yes, keep writing...