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The slip Of a Girl
by Selene Skye
Saturday, October 04, 2008
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There is no greater pain than the loss of a child, though she may have been no more than a heartseed pod inside a womb, loss is loss, and it is never forgotten.



For the dream of Sophia.


The slip of a girl

is very much like a black and white morning dew drop

on a windowsill beyond the horizon of your morning tea

she undulates

in the swirl of leaves in your asian cup

like a dragon

unfolding each scale to mesmerize you out

of unadorned thoughts about your morning commute

like petals

they fall on the rim of your dish

with sunlight

as your wife wanders in from a morning waterfall

glistening and lovely

in her white robe;

when was the last time you told her how beautiful she is

that she is like an ornament on the old oak of your mind

that her limbs remind you of ivory branches

underneath which you curl and take refuge out of the responsibilities

of being a man

 

The slip of a girl

she runs in and out of bursts of sunrays spilling through the curtains

ruffled across the kitchen window

her laughter like razor

on the vine of everything that has been lost

her undulations wispy sweet specters

as she bumps into the old fat cat lounging by the bowl of goods;

old Grey is the only other who sees her like you

and though you think the ghosts should make her shiver and arch and hiss

she purrs

and rolls onto her back for invisible childish hands to dance

across her full belly

 

The slip of a girl

is around every bend of memory

her crystal laughter in every sound of china falling to the floor

as your wife hunches over the broken pieces of the two of you;

when was the last time you pulled her into your old melodies

or attempted to amuse her muse inside an envelope filled

with notes of love

and wrapped up in your ocean of once upon a times

when was the last time you comforted her in your mutual pain

 

The slip of a girl

she sits on the countertop

little legs kicking back and forth

back and forth

blue eyes reflecting the sky beyond the window

through her papyrus skin

as your wife picks up the china pieces without sound;

you lift the heaviness off your thighs

and out of your pensive heart

and walk

and fold across her white robe like the dawn

 

The slip of a girl

she smiles

and whispers across the mother belly

and the father hands

this slip of a girl who never was

beyond a story inside a fragile womb that could not hold her

and yet who had such a tale to tell

and such a slip of presence as to burn brilliant inside a memory

of two who loved her

her could have beens

her was

her is

and her will be

 

copyright:2008victoriaseleneskyedeme/publishamerica

from

THE RASPBERRY GIRL

Coming to Bookstores in Nov.2008

 




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Reviewed by John Leko 11/29/2008
...to sail upon your words...of sensitivity and light...is to bring each and every image you create...to surface...its reflection...the sometime tearful water of the soul.
most excellent work as always VictoriaSelene...
John
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 11/16/2008
Had that girl lived this wonderful life it would of been so thrilling to her to have her husbands love and him by her side. Loved this different write, and things happen to all sometimes like this. Sad but true.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 11/7/2008
This is superbly beautiful...the fleeting thoughts slipping in and out among the story you wove. It has all of the right emotions of gentle love, nostalgia, melancholy and yet...there is joy within the lines as well...a sense of healing, as much healing as ever can be done when a child is lost.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Charlie 10/6/2008
I love this... from the slip of a girl that you are, weaver of images, to the slip of a girl you dream of-- it's all beautiful. I always love your fairytale-feel with added depth.

It means something extra beautiful to me. Thank you. --charlie
Reviewed by Androsedek Malkye 10/5/2008
"The slip Of a Girl" is an inspiring poemization in contents and imagery.

Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/5/2008
another classic beauty from your pen of swirling imaginations -- rich with ancient lore interlacing centuries of perspectives across myriad civiliztions -- great to sate on the must of your poetic wines again -- peace and love sweet lady -- JMW
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 10/5/2008
Your heart pours into this thoughtful write that reveres the life of a child even in its seedling beginnings. Blessings.
Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 10/4/2008
Shimmering beauty in your imagery. It is impossible not to be deeply moved when reading this poem. I love the alternation of short and longer lines, especially in the first stanza, it gives a particular rhythm, it suggests something, then explains it, completes it.
Very interesting.

Axilea
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace 10/4/2008
Very beautiful writing sweet lady...Hugsss
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/4/2008
VictoriaSelene--what talent! I've read and reread this and placed it in my library to that I can it read again. And again. What a beautiful
tribute to Sophia. -gene.
Reviewed by Bonnie May 10/4/2008
Beautiful write you slip of a girl this was adorable and flowed like honey from a jar. Well done and thank your for your visit to my site and review. Best wishes, Bonnie


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