by JAG Garcia
Wednesday, March 19, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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When I gaze upon those Spanish eyes,
eyes that sparkle like stars in the night,
I fall in your ocean of serenity.
And I find myself drifting toward you,
attracted, like a galleon to the lighthouse.
The serenity in your eyes,
spreads, like spilled wine into my soul,
and intoxicates my spirit with its peace.
I feel my heart beating quietly and subdued
as the blood in my veins flows slowly.
At last, my restless spirit, finds shelter
within the confines of your warm embrace.
My face rests, nestled upon your shoulder.
And just before I kiss your cherry-red lips,
I hear your soul whispering, "I love you".
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|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|OOOOO WEEEEE This one I can truly groove to! Filled with passion and heat! SC|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Outstanding imagery, feelings and rhythm... "Serenity" glows.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Alain Gracio
|Innocent and supple. Straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Very romantic, especially those last two lines!!!|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Perfect...every word carefully crafted. Exquisitely written! Love, Diana.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Passionately written and soothing to one's soul...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|Good job! It was nice to read a little poetry dedicated to love and devotion|