|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|Ooooh, a good one. great ending! thanks for sharing. and thanks for the Dempsey tip.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YOU got that right! :)
WArmly,Warrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hard hiting in the face offering for sure!!
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
right in yo face
you packed it in this one
very much so enjoyed!!!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Enjoyed very much,Hugsssssss|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|When you get what you want
You just might also
Get what you deserve
A powerful message for all, Sue.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|such a very true write as well as a good reminder--I really like this|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Wisdom within these lines. Enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|I'll bet you feel better(smilessss).|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is wise advice, Sue. It applies in many, many cases. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by George Thompson
I love it! It's just so perfect and absolutely describes how we "humans" act when we know better. Important words you've put in poetic format. Great!! :>)
|Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
|I always was a huge rolling stones fan. GR8 Poem BTW. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Strong and harsh and I wouldn't want to be the young lady this is directed at for I say she has earned herself some problems.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Wooo now that is some VERY powerful advice. This is brilliant!|